Thursday, February 16, 2012

Eluceat Omnibus Lux

What do Borges, Dante, Mike Tyson, Ezra Pound, Lorin Stein, and deli meats have in common? They're all masturbatory fodder for my creative process. I pretty much pull my pants down and reveal all in this story...so enjoy!

3 comments:

  1. 7 Use regional dialect, patois, sparingly. Once you start spelling words in dialogue phonetically and loading the page with apos­trophes, you won't be able to stop.

    Ebonics. Too much in your story, meng.

    I liked the allusions, you mack-daddy Brad Pitt soul-surfing wish you could be Dane Reynolds wanna-be.

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  2. Yo, Lorin, that be you? Gots to disagree with you on that.
    I think I did a somewhat decent job balancing. It's not like the pages are "loaded" with it as you and Elmore Leonard say. Glad you liked the allusions at least. Thanks for reading.

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  3. "We were at a family barbecue celebrating my cousin’s high school graduation (public school)."

    LOL


    how you gona act like u didnt jack my hugh kenner reference tho br0? its cool just cite dat chit:

    Wilding, I.B. "Rant on website." 11 Feb 2012



    yo my g...u like.....write madd good yo, u feelz da kid, ite then im out gota practice popups for tmrmw ite duke 1

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